Short Story Snippet
I've decided to be brave and post a piece of one of my nearly completed short stories. This is a tale about a woman, her two children and an encounter with a stranger. Though comments are appreciated I'm in no way soliciting free critiques. I'm hoping to find a literary journal who will accept this story, though I'm as prepared as I can be for repeated rejections. " Whatcha got there?" The sound of his voice startled both of the kids , and Missy let out a little chirp of a scream. "You scared us!" yelped Travis. "We didn't know you were there!" Missy prodded the crab with her toe. "I think he's dead" she told the white-haired man, who smiled at her innocence. "Do you kids live nearby?" the old man asked. "Over there" Travis offered, pointing without taking his eyes off of the crab. "Mom says she doesn't want us talking to strangers"...